Comments on: Asthmatic

By: flawnt

flawnt — Mon, 28 Dec 2009 20:28:32 +0000

thanks lorraine – i am not personally someone who has ever come near self destruction, but i can see you might be right. “victoriously living” is so well put!

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By: Lorraine Joubert

Lorraine Joubert — Mon, 28 Dec 2009 15:20:43 +0000

Finnegan, this is so good! Anyone who ever decided on self-destruction and then found him/herself victoriously living, will absolutely enjoy this!

By: flawnt

flawnt — Sun, 27 Dec 2009 21:59:53 +0000

thanks susan and hazar, very much for your lovely words! traveling, i only look over my shoulder at the net and it was wonderful to read this!

By: Hazar Worth

Hazar Worth — Sun, 27 Dec 2009 16:58:24 +0000

For the one minute and seventeen seconds that it took me to read your piece Finnegan, I will experience the thirty-minutes allowing the power of this piece to penetrate me over and over and over again, like a sniper staring down his scope to the cross-hairs where my intended assignment has taken his last bite of food before taking him, and his body guards out in smooth fashion…

By: susan

susan — Sun, 27 Dec 2009 14:13:44 +0000

I love this! It’s so hopeful/hopeless where we want to know why but don’t care since we’re caught up in the mechanics of the plan. The ending is superb and comes unexpectedly. Really, I love this.